day tripper

Sliding into the front seat I grip the steering wheel tightly, first day of school. Junior year, second year at this school. Transferred halfway through freshman year, forced to attend ...

Hello! This was cute! Made me giggle at 7:40 in the morning :D Charlie grumbled, nibbling on what remained of last night's twenty-three boxes of pizza and spinning around on ...

Wow, are you sure you don't know my family? Because, I'm pretty sure you just wrote a short piece about them. Except, in my family, I'm the dancer, writer and ...

This was beautiful! I was very engrossed in the feelings, but don't get too carried away with those metaphors! Simplicity is a wonderful thing in some situations, my dear. Anyways, ...

Skins has covered a majority of the reviewing for this piece, but I'll still share my opinion on the overall story. It was short handed for me. The writing and ...

Mrs Felly won't see me... This should be Mrs. Felly with a period. "Mandy?" came the shrill voice. The 'c' in came should be capitalized. I noticed many little things ...

Wow, out off the three years I've been apart of the YWS, I've never seen a post so short have so much potential. This is incomplete, though. I feel like ...

Thanks for the review, Justis! As I said, I would return the favor. Well, I'm a big romance reader so this sparked my interest, but when I started to read ...

Hey;D Aight, here we go! Corrections I could make you an omelet, Links. With cheese and sausage, just like your dad used to make. Or maybe some toast? We’ve got ...

I will be back later to review this; but wow! This was actually a great pleasure for me to read because I can relate 100% to this story from past ...

Hai! Your avitar is what my friends and I call McWeeze [inside joke]. Haha d: All right well, I find this to be... well, how should I say this. I ...

HAI! Welcome to YWS! :smt039 Glad to be yer first review :D I'm very active on the site so if you ever have a question, feel free to PM me;D ...

:smt039 I suicided once. Do you mean I attempted suicide once? But, you know, I managed, like we all do, and things began to come together, and I got a ...

:smt039 All of the emotions, Mixed into one. Yay for great openings! Mementos of thought, And the sadness of loss. Eh.... not a big fan of this. Like the cement ...

I AM BACK. Haha. Why did he send me here? Frustration and uncertainty filled my every bone. Is it some kind of test? I think the questions should be in ...